In between shots this Sunday at a Cotton mill. The shot doesnt match the mood or attitude of the day by any means but i liked the way it looked and gave it a different processing feel than my usual. Now I want to know if it works or not.

So let 'er rip.

I like it, dude. Nothing I can critique.

she looks pissed off, cold and like a vampire/zombie that's about to attack in a horror film. Not to say it's not a very good photo, that's just the feeling I get from it.

Originally Posted by BobbyT

I like it, dude. Nothing I can critique.

Thanks dude.

Originally Posted by jacobsen1

she looks pissed off, cold and like a vampire/zombie that's about to attack in a horror film. Not to say it's not a very good photo, that's just the feeling I get from it.

Yeah that is the feeling that i got from it too, and the reason i say it's not my usual.

I think it is cropped a bit tight. Otherwise it seems technically well done.

is it too much of the top of the head gone, or the hair being chopped that is too tight? both? neither?

I think I'd like to see more or all of the top of her head.

Originally Posted by brian1971

I think I'd like to see more or all of the top of her head.

thanks for the feedback. this crop is not a usual for me so i am not used to framing it, this helps

Originally Posted by simmda00

I like it..looks good to me!!

Thanks

I like the off center, but I feel it cuts too close to the forehead and the bottom is a bit tight too. The processing has a cold feeling as well.

SWEET! Love it.

The only things I have to say arent so much critique, but I wonder what it would have looked like in portrait as opposed to lanscape?

Im also of the thinking that its cropped too tight.

Looks really nice!
The crop may be a little too tight for me, but it really works here!

Originally Posted by thomps6s

I like the off center, but I feel it cuts too close to the forehead and the bottom is a bit tight too. The processing has a cold feeling as well.

Thanks shawn, the cold feel is what i was going for. does it feel off to you?

Originally Posted by WRXJIM

SWEET! Love it.

The only things I have to say arent so much critique, but I wonder what it would have looked like in portrait as opposed to lanscape?

Im also of the thinking that its cropped too tight.

Thanks for the input Jim.
I have others in portrait but none had this same feel.

Originally Posted by Will 46 and 2

Looks really nice!
The crop may be a little too tight for me, but it really works here!

Thanks Will.

Dan, it works very well for what you were going for.

cool. Thanks again Shawn. i certainly want to know if it hit anyone as not matching the photo or something.