Hey everybody,

I don't know if this is the right spot but I am looking for some critique of my site. What do you like, not like and what is needed or could be better?

Any input would be great.

http://www.ckimballphotography.com

Thanks folks,

Rock, since you're trying to make money from the site, I moved this to the "Making Money" section. I'll check out the site real quick and give you my thoughts in a second.

Initial thoughts...

It's too cluttered. There's too much for me to look at and read. Also, you might consider double-checking a good deal of your spelling/grammar on the front page.

Overall, it's a damn good start/site and much better than anything I can make. Maybe tell us what your main objective with the site is? I know you're trying to sell your service, but are you trying to show off your work to people you meet in person more than get new clients via the web or vice-versa? Just a little bit more basic info about the site is what I'm after.

I like the site overall, IMO I think the gallery needs to be redone. Id also consider simplifying it. It has alot of information but depending on the client you are trying to market, it may be a bit overwhelming.

Just my .02$

Thanks guys. My proof reader is sleeping so I will have her go over it in the morning. I will look at the layout as well.

What would you different with the galleries? I didn't want to use flash on them cause alot of folks don't seem to like it.....

^ Not really sure, I just think the framing and presentation needs to be altered to really peak the interest. You can view all the images from the gallery and not click a single one because its clear enough to see the image, but not striking enough to click... I guess thats the best way to describe it. You want to draw people in. Maybe do Categories then run a slideshow?

Originally Posted by subimatt

^ Not really sure, I just think the framing and presentation needs to be altered to really peak the interest. You can view all the images from the gallery and not click a single one because its clear enough to see the image, but not striking enough to click... I guess thats the best way to describe it. You want to draw people in. Maybe do Categories then run a slideshow?

Okay, good.....

This has me thinking. If I change a bit of code.....Hrmmmmm...

Thanks that does help.

needs way less words and more images, especially on the opening page. If you need all the info, put it on one of the other pages, but the first page needs to be eye catching and sell the photography right away. Then explain what they'll get.

Thanks all.....

my first impression was "too much going on, where do I start?"
I have to be honest, I looked and almost clicked away from the page immediately.
Keeping a visitor's attention is key.

I think the keys to a good website are:
a. Keep it clean and simple
b. make your images easily accessible (and easy to order if you are selling)
c. briefly talk about yourself and your history
d. simple and clean contact page.

I think once you clean it up you will be on to something.

My site is pretty simple and is in no means perfect. It needs to be cleaned up as well. My gallery especially.

I am looking forward to seeing your progress.

Agreed with Shawn (thomps6s), my website is by no means perfect, but I made it as simple as possible. You actually reminded me of something I need to ask in my own photo website thread..

Well I see what you are saying. I have moved some stuff and trimmed down the index. I will keep working at it.

Yeah, just let us know whenever you make an update and we'll check it out again.

Originally Posted by quirkeejames

One thing I did notice that hasn't been mentioned is your "Quotes" page goes off the screen and requires scrolling right. Easy fix.

huh.... I don't see that here. I checked it in 3 different browsers and it looks fine. What screen resolution are you using?

Made a few changes. I am a long way from there but I would like to see if you guys think I am heading the right way.....

Thanks I will look at all those things. I am not sure what I am going to do with the gallery yet so that is temp. but I do want it embedded in the page when it is all said and done.

^ That's why I take photos--cuz of my dad--largely, anyway...

Yeah my Dad got into it and got me interested. We used to go shoot together he just isn't up for it anymore. Glad he got me started though.....