If any of you would be so obliged would you take a look at some images i've been working on at www.jgardnerphotos.com/gallery/4463738_N64gU

i've been working on getting a sport's portfolio together for some work i'm trying to land. Nothing too detailed, I realize there are 13 images in there right now

-jake

Jake, I'm going to move this to the 'Making Money' forum.

But that aside, you do some rather good work. I'm impressed. It also looks clean and functional. Good job. Wish I could offer more than that but it's not really my field.

No problem! Wasn't sure where exactly to put it.

Thanks

-jake

I'll give it a shot....
1-3 look nice
4- framing is a little awkward. I want to see where he's throwing the ball a little. It would have worked better if you have done a more 3/4 shot from the side and been able to frame for where the ball is traveling.
5- can't see either face at all. Would have tried stepping left or right to catch at least one of them in profile.
6- nice
7- would like to see just a little more room in front of 29.
8- parts of the car look like they might be blown and the whole thing kinda feels low contrast. Lots of haze that day? Nice shot otherwise, I would try and re-process the raw.
9-10 nice
11- could you get into the site I think I would have tried a shot on the crane side with a UWA to emphasize it.
12-13 I just wish you could have isolated the wrestlers from the background. Can't get the exif to see what you shot
though.

Picking nits a bit, but I'm assuming that's what you wanted?

Thanks! That's exactly what I wanted! I prolly will narrow down to 10 shots, but unfortunately they won't be my 10 best shots . . . I know what they are looking for and specific shots are put in there to match there needs.

As far as the shot of the new Colts stadium . . . i'm still waiting for access. I work at a engineering design firm and that's one of our projects so I hope to get in before work is completed!